milk should not be banned at Awapuni kura
this is my writing about milk should not be banned at awapuni school and you should never throw your rubbish away into trees and rivers,streams and our beautiful ocean and there is some music for you to listen 👍✌😁
Hey Seth you did some very interesting work i am from awapuni school and my name is Couper very good work
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Seth.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way that you did a little bit of information about your writing. I liked the way that you put a title on the top f your writing.
Next time you could start you sentences and titles with a capital letter and maybe next time you could work on putting just a bit more information about your writing.
From Tuturi
thank you my fellow friends
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